A process essay I wrote for my AP English class. I got an A+ on it, and a 9 out of 9 on the grading scale, so I figured it was good enough to share with you guys! ^^
Very impressive, Jenai. I did not know that Callan was even capable of giving A+'s, though I see that you have earned it. Though, she did not give take-home essays either or prompts that could generate such conviction.
The question is: do you believe what you have written?
(By the way, you might want to check out the second to the last sentence; there seems to be a typo or grammar error [unto to].)
Thanks, Oliver! Haha, yeah, I was pretty much stupefied when the paper slapped down on my desk, and a big green A+ adorned the top right corner. ...even stranger was the fact that I was the only 9 in the ENTIRE CLASS. What in god's name? XD
Yes, I do. I am more or less incapable of writing if I don't believe in what I'm typing. I guess it worked out for the best, huh? Haha.
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"We all make choices... but in the end, our choices make US." - Andrew Ryan, Bioshock
Well, it is good that you write with conviction, though sometimes it is good to write something completely opposite of what you believe to see how your beliefs hold up to scrutiny. If it holds then you will hold those feelings even stronger.
Devious Comments
The question is: do you believe what you have written?
(By the way, you might want to check out the second to the last sentence; there seems to be a typo or grammar error [unto to].)
Yes, I do. I am more or less incapable of writing if I don't believe in what I'm typing. I guess it worked out for the best, huh? Haha.
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"We all make choices... but in the end, our choices make US." - Andrew Ryan, Bioshock
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